your love
stormed upon me
like a raging tsunami
in the deepest darkness
ripping roaring running
unprepared was i
no defenses
no shelter from the storm
no safety
no safety
twisting tearing twirling
nothing
nothing to spare me
torrent engulfed
licking me under
swirling sucking swallowing
drowning
in its
wake
at
last
2 comments:
Ah, Love is the antithesis of being in control! I wish I were swept up by another torrent such as this!
Your words are marvelous!
you took the words right outta my mouth, lady!
thank you for your nice comment! come again soon - i'll be over your way b4 the day is up!
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