before the fall of grace
takes me to that special place
where lost salvation waits
takes me to that special place
where lost salvation waits
and i must listen to my fate
let me kiss upon your face
let me kiss upon your face
and linger long in love’s embrace
so let us soar now into space
and all our cares the sky erase
never fear my sweet soul mate
for love of you is why i wait
18 comments:
This was sweetness.
I loved the rhyme scheme.
This is really not very deep, but beautiful...yes!
NOTE: By "not deep" is meant that even *I* understood it--grin!!!
Great poem, full of rhyme, love and seetness, yes lady dear!
;)
It is full of words usually taken for granted.
With words like this you will most definitely attract a soul mate. The image coupled with your beautiful poetry gives a transcendental effect that touches the core.
Thank you for stopping by :) Blessings and love across the miles.
Your soulmate is on the way into your life. Wonderful.
i loved the sweet poetry of this one, sweet jenean...and how nice was it to see you on my blog too, thank you for your kind words, as always....this is wonderful, i like the rhyming of it.xo
greetings cosmos! welcome and thanks so much for dropping by and leaving such kind words - please come again soon and as often as you like - campfire's always going over here!!! have a great day!
oh, hello again S! so, you did find your way here, after all - great! thanks very much and please come again soon - oh, yes, i know what you mean!!! :)
and dear dulce! you know how much that means coming from you!!! thank you, lady!!!
wonderful to have you come over, lakeviewer! thanks so much for your visits which mean a lot!!! have a fabulous evening!
oh, wow, sharla! i am so honored by your kind words! you know how i love your own work, lady!
neat, trish!!! he's on the way!!! fabulous! [thanks so much for the good thoughts!]
and kind words, trish!
lovelylinda - well, you now how i so love your own place, lady! and your visits here always bring such love and light for which i am so grateful! have a great california evening!!!
A beautiful and exquisite piece of poetry, Jenean. There is always the waiting and the yearning and the wanting that makes it all so much more beautiful...
NEvine
oh, yes, the beauty of the waiting and wanting, nevine - what is it "they" say about the chase being better than the catch, or something like that :)
Hello my beautiful blue Gipsy your fellow true blue is back. The waiting for a loved one can be long but the sweet salvation after he returns is undeniable :)
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