do your eyes
glimmer simmer
at the sight of her
does your pulse
quicken thicken
like sweet sugar syrup
at the thought of her
do your hands
confess caress
her steamy smell
on your chest
as they do
mine
i dance with you...only in dreams...
6 comments:
Very subtly sensuous, Jenean. Exquisite!
Nevine
just ingesting a little food for thought with this one, nevine! ;)
There is a lyrical magic to your poetry. Have you thought of doing prose? There is a BODY LANGUAGE blogfest going on this weekend.
Reading this post, I felt stronly that could write a moving selection where the two characters conversed without dialogue.
Here is the link if you're interested :
http://thelabotomyofawriter.blogspot.com/2010/04/announcing-body-language-blogfest.html
Come by my blog, WRITING IN THE CROSSHAIRS, if it appeals to you. Have magic come upon you unaware this weekend, Roland
oh this is so sensual and inviting... WOW
lovely is too small a word... ;)
Dulce
hello roland - well, thank you so much for your note! sorry to be just now able to respond - and to have missed the deadline for the weekend fest - but i do look forward to checking out the links you were kind enough to provide - thanks very much for all of it! and please do come by again at your leisure - see you soon!!!
oh, dulce! as always your words do make my day! see you over at your place, lady!
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