into the darkness
shut out
the day
leave that
world behind
weave your way
through my skin
into my heart
where time
stands still
unfettered
untethered
where
darkness is
the beacon
guiding me
lighting
the path
to you
to us
to our time
our world
the world
of darkness
10 comments:
OMG, this is beautiful.
Oh, how beautiful... that world of darkness... that secret world of US. Your words are gorgeous, Jenean!
Nevine
I'm gonna lie to you
Lie to you sweet Jenean
But how could I
Would I tell you how marvellous this poem is, how it is your best ever... Could I simply leave a word saying how extraordinary this is... Could I, should I, why, rather why not, I do not know...
Beautiful I do not know, it would take me half a beer to tell you that, then I would not know if such a short superlative would not rather be an insult!
My I'm in swinging moods, this half-naked woman draws my eye like a magnet...
In the end you will not know if I like this poem or not. You see the dilemma 'cause you're a very bright woman: answering in a few words would devalue it whatever I say, but answering at length could be no fun...
In the end, I'm not sure that this poem is very important, sweet Jenean. You, as a woman, are, and terribly.
I'm not sure that I'm making any sense tonight. Maybe you'll erase this comment, maybe not, that's the thrill.
Thank you, yours great blogs.
i think the image is a magnificent thing in and of itself and even as a post with no words, would more than speak volumes, don't you think, trish? but it did seem to go with these little words that spilled from my pen one day!
you know, nevine, that world of darkness truly does hold such beauty - perhaps more than the lighted world, yes? in any event, it is certainly a place near and dear to my own heart, the world of darkness! and your own words here mean so much!
and, dear roger, whatever am i to do with you! here in the gypsy's tent, you know you are free to say or not say whatever it is that is on your mind or in your heart - and your presence always brings sunshine for which i am grateful! and thank you for the kind words of moi!
greetings, museums/jonathan - thank you so much for your presence here - and for the incredible blogs of your own - a rare find!
WoW! The reader is transfixed here, transformed. Well done.
oh, lake, we do what we can! ;)
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