unfulfilled love - unrequited love - love relinquished - life unlived...

we all are gypsies of a sort wandering traveling through this life other lives space and time here there and yon on roads less traveled - this is a written and visual journal of my own travels - imagined and/or real - come along with me - we'll dance among the stars under the sun and over the moon - we'll share our stories of love around the campfire - come along -

poetry from the heart...

POETRY FROM THE HEART - my own words dedicated to all the words left unspoken, the acts left undone - the love unlived unfulfilled -

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Tuesday, May 11, 2010

sweet relief...

somethin’s comin' over me
smotherin’ my soul
don’t know what it can be

like a big wooley blanket
on a hot summer night
it lays on me and hugs me tight

holdin’ me down
pullin’ me under
think I’m gonna drown

like a river of steam
on a sunshiny day
rainin’ its heat as i pray

try to be good
whatever you sow so shall you reap
and sweet relief don’t come cheap
somethin’s come over me
stainin’ my spirit
and i know what it be


Trish and Rob MacGregor said...

So this is the feeling you mentioned.

odd WV: vermagna.
As in: magma?

Dulce said...

Oh that sounds like a panic attack to me.. ao well written... HArd and dense and sweet and scary, all at the same time...



oh, gee, trish, really really odd your wv and vermagma - the first thing i saw was verdant magma - and you know, verdant literally means "covered with green growth/vegation" - then connect that to magma! and again, how odd that you sometimes know what i'm "really" saying more than i - or recognize it as such - because with this piece, writing it, i was doing it more from a physical/sensual perspective [or so i consciously thought] - but now, i see it is EXACTLY how i've been feeling from a spiritual/cosmic perspective just as i described in my comments at your place yesterday - geezzeeee - and even as i was writing it i was a bit confused about why i'd chosen "smotherin" and the other descriptive phrases "river of steam...rainin' its heat as i pray" - but yes, this is "the feeling" i mentioned - totally - thanks so much for your vision!


hey lady dulce! oh i love how you respond to things! a sassy saucy woman! see you over at your place!

MaGold - The Expressionist said...

Your powerfull words in context with this painting provoce wunderfull feelings and ideas
for an expressive love.
thank you!


greetings, rainer - wonderful of you to come by and leave such kind words - i am happy that it pleases you - see you over at your studio! have a glorious day!