somethin’s comin' over me
smotherin’ my soul
don’t know what it can be
like a big wooley blanket
on a hot summer night
it lays on me and hugs me tight
holdin’ me down
pullin’ me under
think I’m gonna drown
like a river of steam
on a sunshiny day
rainin’ its heat as i pray
try to be good
whatever you sow so shall you reap
and sweet relief don’t come cheap
somethin’s come over me
stainin’ my spirit
and i know what it be
6 comments:
So this is the feeling you mentioned.
odd WV: vermagna.
As in: magma?
Oh that sounds like a panic attack to me.. ao well written... HArd and dense and sweet and scary, all at the same time...
Dulce
oh, gee, trish, really really odd your wv and vermagma - the first thing i saw was verdant magma - and you know, verdant literally means "covered with green growth/vegation" - then connect that to magma! and again, how odd that you sometimes know what i'm "really" saying more than i - or recognize it as such - because with this piece, writing it, i was doing it more from a physical/sensual perspective [or so i consciously thought] - but now, i see it is EXACTLY how i've been feeling from a spiritual/cosmic perspective just as i described in my comments at your place yesterday - geezzeeee - and even as i was writing it i was a bit confused about why i'd chosen "smotherin" and the other descriptive phrases "river of steam...rainin' its heat as i pray" - but yes, this is "the feeling" i mentioned - totally - thanks so much for your vision!
hey lady dulce! oh i love how you respond to things! a sassy saucy woman! see you over at your place!
Your powerfull words in context with this painting provoce wunderfull feelings and ideas
for an expressive love.
thank you!
greetings, rainer - wonderful of you to come by and leave such kind words - i am happy that it pleases you - see you over at your studio! have a glorious day!
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