no matter what she tried and tried
her heart from inside out had cried
but from herself she could not hide
then she felt the sound of her tears
struggling to drown the ghosts of her fears
keeping them with her always near
sorrow trickling down her face
washing away love’s lost grace
leaving her soul without a trace
16 comments:
"..leaving her soul without a trace."
Ouch! This soul needs succor.
Seems that is where I am just now......
so sad, but beautifully written. it has the same texture as thomas hardy.
much love
You can't be compared to anyone. Your words and feelings are as unique as you are. I hope the person to whom these beautiful words are written reads this blog.
this is so sad, sweets...hoping you are well....xoxox
This is indeed so sad...beautiful.
Loved the rythm and rhymes here. Love is sad again.
Hugs my dear lady!
;)
D.
greetings lake! oh, i think all souls need succor, some just more than others perhaps ;) and in this case, well, you're certainly right on point, dear lady! so wonderful of you to come by -
dear gemel - well, it's a big club, i think - although i do sometimes feel as if i am the only charter member! :)
hello there stacey! so great to see you again! and to have thomas hardy's name even mentioned! i am more than humbled, dear lady!
dear linda - yes, i am well, dear friend! and you? are you physically better? otherwise? i think of you and send you feel better hugs -
hello there cowboy! ah, yes, the beauty of sadness! thank you for your kind words and your visit! it's always great having you drop by the campfires!
hey there sweetness!!! oh, it's so great to see you and i always always look forward to your visits - and you know i'll be over to your place asap, lady dulce!!! have a fantastic remainder of the weekend!
and trish, i have waited til last to respond to your comment which moves me so - besides, how can mere words portray the gratitude i have? they cannot - i thank you!
You're an original, Jenean.
namaste' trish!
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