feel so lost
can’t see
outside of me
through the dark
hole in my heart
feel so lost
can’t see
inside of me
try as i might
can’t find the light
feel so lost
can’t see
outside of me
through the dark
hole in my heart
feel so lost
can’t see
inside of me
try as i might
can’t find the light
feel so lost
12 comments:
Oh Please do not!
Hope this pain is fictional... and if it is not let it flow until it goes
Beautiful piece as always
;)
just playing with a few little words, dear dulce! :)
flow till it goes!!! exactly!!! :)
This is quite insightful; when we feel lost, we can't find our base, our sense of balance, our light, as you put it.
Our light. Your light. Got news for you. YOUR light is so bright that all the lost can find their way here.
Love this! Your words are so vivid.
for sure, lake, out of balance - out of the light - feelin' lost -
well, that's certainly how i feel about you all, macgregors - showin' me the light - your light! :)
hey cowboy! so glad you like - sometimes i don't really know from whence the words come - from somewhere else - deep down inside - you know the place -
Sad but so lovely , the lines i could feel them Gypsy babe...i hope you don't feel lost anymore want to see that wild gypsy desire back :)
oh, hello there, wild wild rose!!! what a beautiful name, by the way! could be the beginning of a poem, just those words -
anyway, thank you for your words, as always, dear lady - and no, not sad or lost - but my heart remembers both - regardless of either, however, the gypsy never loses her passion! :)
Sometimes it is just necessary to feel sadness, and to express it. It's poetic to do so and from the soul. It's vital and healing...
Missed you LADY!!! and your words!
xxoo
hey calli - and i, you! so please come again soon! yes, a kind of exorcism of the demon sadness!
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