from you
there was
no thief
no thief
in the night
sneaking without sound
into the dark
that was my life
stealing
slowly
surely
my love
no
from you
there was
the barging in
the raging stampede
the complete attack
holding unspeakable ransom
in one swift swoop
leaving no option
but
the total surrender
of my heart
sneaking without sound
into the dark
that was my life
stealing
slowly
surely
my love
no
from you
there was
the barging in
the raging stampede
the complete attack
holding unspeakable ransom
in one swift swoop
leaving no option
but
the total surrender
of my heart
.
6 comments:
there- you've done it so greatly again... don't ever run out of words?
Of Coure not ... for you are a genius my dear
'holding unspeakable ransom
in one swift swoop'
oh and then that surrender, i love surrendering...
oh, yeah, ladydulce!!! and that's exactly how it was! all done in one swiftswoop! done and done again! and what was there left but to surrender! sweet sweet surrender!!! how sweet it is!!! ~ sigh ~
The rhythm of this poem has the tone of urgency and the pace of passion; it is very moving. Love your stuff! Have a wonderful and creatively fantastic Happy muse year!!
thank you so much for coming by pam - wonderful to see you and always to hear from you - many many best wishes for you and yours!!!
I think i am going to fall right in here. I am such a love sick fool..!
Smiles,
Silver
oh, just come on and join the club, silver - that ole love sick fool club!!! ;) wonderful to see you!
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